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雅思小作文改写那点事儿
雅思小作文如果读图没问题并且作文囊括所有信息，就可以拿到比较理想的分数吗？No，No，No！数据类作文也好，图片作文也好都容易落入重复语言的俗套。毕竟数据就在哪里，翻来覆去，流程步骤就是那样，循规蹈矩，地图题好不到哪去，无非就是变来变去。不过我们还是可以“以万变应不变”把小作文写活起来。
(1)改写题目作为开头段(以OGTest1为例)
题目：
ThechartbelowgivesinformationonthepercentageofBritishpeoplegivingmoneytocharitybyagerangefortheyears1990and2010.
改变从现在开始：
1.thechart——thebarchart
2.gives——illustrates
3.information——statisticalinformation
4.on关于——regarding
5.percentage——diverseproportion
6.British——UK
7.peoplegivingmoneytocharity——peoplewhogavemoneytocharity——donatingmoneytocharity
8.agerange——differentagegroups
9.fortheyears1990and2010——intworespectiveyears:1990and2010
见证奇迹的时刻：
ThebarchartillustratesstatisticalinformationregardingthediverseproportionofpeopleinUKdonatingmoneytocharitybydifferentagegroupsintworespectiveyears:1990and2010.
让世界看到你的改变：亲自动手DIY你自己的开头段
练习1：
ThechartbelowgivesinformationaboutSouthland’smainexportsin2000,*20..,andfutureprojectionsfor2025.(OGTest4)
练习2:
ThepiechartbelowshowstheonlineshoppingsalesforretailsectorsinNewZealandin2003and2013.
练习3:
ThechartbelowshowsthechangesthattookplaceinthreedifferentareasofcrimeinNewportcitycentrefrom2003-2012.
(2)让主体段摆脱单调从改变主语开始：(剑4满分考官范文给我们的启示)：
ThetablegivesabreakdownofthedifferenttypesoffamilywhowerelivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.
Onaverage,11%ofallhouseholds,comprisingalmosttwomillionpeople,wereinthisposition.However,thoseconsistingofonlyoneparentorasingleadulthadalmostdoublethisproportionofpoorpeople,with21%and19%respectively.
Couplesgenerallytendedtobebetteroff,withlowerpovertylevelsforcoupleswithoutchildren(7%)thanthosewithchildren(12%).Itisnoticeablethatforbothtypesofhouseholdwithchildren,ahigherthanaverageproportionwerelivinginpovertyatthistime.
Olderpeopleweregenerallylesslikelytobepoor,thoughonceagainthetrendfavouredelderlycouples(only4%)ratherthansingleelderlypeople(6%).
Overallthetablesuggeststhathouseholdsofsingleadultsandthosewithchil