GMAT写作题库范文二十八.docx

GMAT写作题库范文（二十八）
写作是个厚积薄发的考试，同学们在备考GMAT写作时，不仅要多练习，也要去掌握一些重点语句。有些题库范文是需要大家掌握并且熟练记忆的，熟记于心才能运用自如，才能举一反三。接下来小编就给大家介绍一下GMAT写作范文，希望对大家备考GMAT写作考试有帮助。
28.Thefollowingappearedintheeditorialsectionofalocalnewspaper.
“Commuteruseofthenewsubwaytrainisexceedingthetransitcompany’sprojections.However,commuteruseoftheshuttlebusesthattransportpeopletothesubwaystationsisbelowtheprojectedvolume.Ifthetransitcompanyexpectscommuterstoridetheshuttlebusestothesubwayratherthandrivethere,itmusteitherreducetheshuttlebusfaresorincreasethepriceofparkingatthesubwaystations.”
Discusshowwellreasoned...etc.
地方报纸的社论：
通勤者对新的地下铁的使用超过了运输公司的设计方案。但是，通勤者对运送人们去地铁站的往返巴士使用低于设计容量。如果运输公司希望通勤者乘往返巴士而不是开车去地铁站，他们必须或者降低巴士车费，或者提高地铁站的停车费。
Theauthorconcludesthatthelocaltransitcompanymusteitherreducefaresfortheshuttlebusesthattransportpeopletotheirsubwaystationsorincreaseparkingfeesatthestations.Thereasonsofferedtosupportthisconclusionarethatcommuteruseofthesubwaytrainisexceedingthetransitcompany’sexpectations,whilecommuteruseoftheshufflebusesisbelowprojectedvolume.Thisargumentisunconvincingbecausetheauthoroversimplifiestheproblemanditssolutionsinanumberofways.
Tobeginwith,byconcludingthatthetransitcompanymusteitherreduceshuttlefaresorincreaseparkingfees,theauthorassumesthatthesearetheonlyavailablesolutionstotheproblemoflimitedshuttleuse.However,itispossiblethatotherfactors—suchasinconvenientshuttleroutingand/orscheduling,safetyconcerns,oranincreaseincarpools—contributetotheproblem.Ifso,adjustingfaresorparkingfeeswouldmightnotsolvetheproblem.
Inaddition,theauthorassumesthatreducingshuttlefeesandincreasingparkingfeesaremutuallyexclusivealternatives.However,theauthorprovidesnoreasonforimposinganeither/orchoice.Adjustingbothshuttlefaresandparkingfeesmightproducebetterresults.Moreover,iftheauthoriswrongintheassumptionthatparkingfeesandshuttlefeesaretheonlypossiblecausesoftheproblem,thenthemosteffectivesolutionmightincludeacomplexofpolicychanges—forexample,inshuttlefares,parkingfees,rerouting,andrescheduling.
Inconclusion,th