GMAT写作题库范文九.docx

GMAT写作题库范文（九）
写作是个厚积薄发的考试，同学们在备考GMAT写作时，不仅要多练习，也要去掌握一些重点语句。有些题库范文是需要大家掌握并且熟练记忆的，熟记于心才能运用自如，才能举一反三。接下来小编就给大家介绍一下GMAT写作范文，希望对大家备考GMAT写作考试有帮助。
9.Thefollowingappearedintheopinioncolumnofafinancialmagazine.
“Onaverage,middle-agedconsumersdevote39percentoftheirretailexpendituretodepartmentstoreproductsandservices,whileforyoungerconsumerstheaverageisonly25percent.Sincethenumberofmiddle-agedpeoplewillincreasedramaticallywithinthenextdecade,departmentstorescanexpectretailsalestoincreasesignificantlyduringthatperiod.Furthermore,totakeadvantageofthetrend,thesestoresshouldbegintoreplacesomeofthoseproductsintendedtoattracttheyoungerconsumerwithproductsintendedtoattractthemiddle-agedconsumer.”
Discusshowwellreasoned...etc.
财经杂志的意见栏：
一般而言，中年消费者的零售消费额的39%用于专卖店的商品何服务。而在年轻一些的消费者中这一比例仅有25%。由于中年消费者的数量在下一10年中将大幅增长，专卖店可以预期他们的销售额会有大幅增长。进一步，为利用这一趋势，这些店应该开始将一些吸引年轻消费者的商品替换为吸引中年消费者的商品。
Sampleessay1:
Theargumentthatdepartmentretailsaleswillincreaseinthenext10yearsandthusdepartmentstoresshouldbegintoreplaceproductstoattractmiddle-agedconsumersisnotentirelylogicallyconvincing,sinceitomitscertaincrucialassumptions
Firstofall,theargumentignorestheabsoluteamountofretailexpenditureofmiddle-agedandyoungerconsumersdevotedtodepartmentstoreproductsandservices.Althoughyoungerconsumersspendasmallerpercentageoftheirretailexpendituretodepartmentstoreproductsthandothemiddle-agedconsumers,theymightactuallyspendmoreintermsoftheabsoluteamount.
Evenifmiddle-agedconsumersarespendingmorethanyoungeronesindepartmentstores,theargumentignoresthepossibilitythatthetrendmaychangewithinthenextdecade.Youngerconsumersmightprefertoshopindepartmentstoresthaninothertypesofstores,andmiddle-agedconsumersmightturntoothertypesofstores,too.Thiswillleadtoahigherexpenditureofyoungerconsumersindepartmentstoresthanthatofmiddle-agedconsumers.
Besides,theargumentneveraddressesthepopulationdifferencebetweenmiddle-agedconsumersandyoungerones.Supposetherearemoreyoungerconsumersthanthemiddle-agedonesnow,thetotalpopulationbaseofyoungerconsume