名师指导-如何改写英语四级写作范文.docx

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名师指导:如何改写英语四级写作范文

考生如何利用考场下的300分钟、3000分钟甚至30000分钟，合理充分地准备四级写作，从而能够轻松自如地应对考场上的30分钟呢?在复习准备四级写作时，我们应该按照“谋篇、段落、句子、措辞”(如图一)“四步走”的宏观复习方式来准备。我们应该将以往的范文作为框架，从谋篇布局着手，加以润色字词句的修饰，将其变成自己的四级高分作文。学习范文或掌握优秀作文是打破提高自己传统写作语言的第一步。下面我们通过2005年12月四级范文，分析学习如何提纯范文中的“谋篇、段落、句子、措辞”并加以利用，使其变成自己的语言。ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourist?1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点2.校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同3.我认为…ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?Nowadays,manyfamousuniversitycampuseshavebecomeoneofthepopulartouristattractions.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofmiddleschoolstudentsvisitTsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversitiesinChina.Intheplacefarawayfromthecapitalcity,thelocalstudentsalsovisittheuniversitiesfamousintheirownprovince.Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortourists?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingforthestudentstovisitthefamousuniversitycampusinthatitcanenablethemiddlestudentstogetmoreinformationabouttheuniversityandtheycanhaveenoughtimeandopportunitytopreparethemselveswiththechancetogetintotheuniversity.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,thepublictourismwillhavenegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtotheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere.Inmyopinion,thetourismtotheuniversitiesisnotagoodthing.Thecampusismainlyaplaceforstudy.Withtheincreasingtourismonthecampus,itwillruinthespiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield.首先，提纯范文“谋篇布局”及结构模板。第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays,……havebecomeoneofthepopular…….IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothat…….第二段：正反列举人们的看法。Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingto……?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingfor……inthat…….Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,……willhavenegativeeffecton……becauseitwillnotonlydoharmto……butalsoto…….第三段：摆明自己观点。