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Writing1
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
YesterdayMattwassick.IpickedupArchiefromthesitterandEloisefromschoolanddecided
toruntoTargetforafewthings.Ihadhopedtobeinandoutquickly.
Ifoundalinewithjustonepersonaheadofmeandbeganorganizingmyitemsonthe
conveyor.Afterplacingmyitems，Ilookeduptoseethatthepersonaheadofmewasanelderly
woman.Shewaspayingforheritemswithchangeandwantedtopurchaseeachseparately.Iwas
frustratedwiththiswomanandtheinconvenienceshehadplacedonme.
ButthenIwatchedtheyoungemployeewiththiswoman.Iwatchedhimhelphercounther
change，eversosoftlytakingitfromhershakinghands.Whensheaskedifshehadenoughtobuy
areusablebag，hetoldhershedidandwenttwolinesovertogetoneforherandthenrepackaged
heritems.Neveroncewasthisemployeeangry.Hewasnothingbutpatientandkind.
AsIwaswatchinghim，IsawthatEloisewastoo.Shewasstandingnexttothewoman，
watchingtheemployeecountthechange.IrealizedIhadn’tbeeninconveniencedatall.Thatmy
daughterwasinsteadwitnessingkindnessandpatienceandbeingtaughtthisvaluablelessonbya
completestranger.
Whenthewomanwasfinished，theemployeebeganringingupmyitemsandthankedmefor
mypatience.Ithenthankedhimforteachinguspatienceandkindnessbyhistreatmentofthat
elderlywoman.WhenhewasfinishedIpushedmycartthroughthestoretryingtofindthe
manager.Iwantedhertoknowoftheemployee’skindnessandpatienceandhowmuchitmeantto
me.Aftertrackingherdownandsharingthestorywithher，weleftTargetwithacartfullof
consumableitems，butwhatismore，aheartfullofgratitudeforsuchaninvaluablelesson.
IfyouareeverintheGlendaleTarget，giveIshmaelasmileandanod.Theworldcoulduse
morepeoplelikehim.
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【写作指导】
要写好记叙文的概要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案：(1)谁做了什么？(2)结果如何？
如果是夹叙夹议文，还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。就该题而言，本文的概要
应该包含：作者购物的时间、地点、结果以及从本次购物中得到的启示，最后用自己的语言
串联起来。
【参考范文】
Thepassagetellsusanexperienceofshopping.(要点1)Oneday，theauthorwithtwo
childrenwenttoTa