GRE新作文备考资料.docx

GRE新作文备考资料

第一篇：GRE新作文备考资料58)Learningisprimarilyamatterofpersonaldiscipline;studentscannotbemotivatedbyschoolorcollegealone.这是一个因果命题，原因不成立，学习不仅是个人的事儿还需要外界激励。即使原因成立也推不出结论：就算学习是自己的事儿，也不能证明学习与外界激励无关。Outline：正：个人因素在学习中确实起到一个很重要的作用有不适当的外界激励没用反：但是学习不仅是个人的事儿还需要外界激励，如果没有及时的外界激励后果不堪设想反：即使承认学习是自己的事儿，也推不出结论，学习与外界激励是有关的，但是需要正确的方法合：学习需要个人和及时正确的外界相结合才可以取得好的效果Islearningjustamatterofpersonaldisciplineandcannotbewhettedbyschoolorcollegecausingawidelydiscussnowadays.Asforme,Iconfirmtheimportanceofthepersonaldisciplineatlearningwhiletheeffectsschoolorcollegeplayedcannotbesimplyignored.Itmustbeadmittedthatlearningisfirstlyamatterofpersonaldisciplinewithoutwhichnothingcouldplaysuchavitalroleinlearning.Everyoneholdshisownmind,interestanddisciplinewhichmaynotbeeasilychangedbyothers.Wecannotforceachildtolearnornotlearn.Asacaseinpoint,John,afriendofmineinmyprimaryschooltime,hadnointerestinlearninginstead,helikedplaygamesandsports.Thisofcourseiratetheteachers,theyassignalotofhomeworkforhimandsetaexamscorestandardforhim.Whileheusedthemethodthateasilyeludetheteacher'srequirementthathecopiedothers'homeworkandcheatinexam.Nomatterwhatwaytheteachermotivatedhim,withouthisdiscipline,johnneverstarttolearn.Thuspersonaldisciplineisacriticalfactorinone'slearning.However,thetimelymotivationofschoolandcollegemaybestillaprimarymatterforastudent.Ifachildhasnointerestsormotivationtostudythenwhatshouldtheenvironmentofhimdo?Onlybeabystanderorahelper?JustasmentionedabovewhatwouldhappenediftheteacherneveraskJohntofinishsomestudyingwork?Johnmayplayeverydaywithoutstudyingevenwithoutpickinghispentowrite!Theconsequenceforhimmaybethathefinallydroppedoutofschoolandplayedeverydaywhichmayleadhimtobeabadguytothesociety.Inconsiderationofthis,theteacher'srequirementmaybehelpfulsomeway.Thusthemotivationoftheenvironmentisstillavitalfactorforone'slearning.EvenifIadmitthatlearningisprimarilyamatterofpersonaldiscipline,Icannotgettheconclusionthatstudentscannotbemotivatedbyschoolorcollege.Wemustgettoknowthatnoteveryoneowntherigh