四级好的英语作文开头,句段.docx

四级好的英语作文开头,句段

第一篇：四级好的英语作文开头,句段1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？2.也会带来一些问题；3.你的看法？点评：2009年的四级考试作文沿袭了近几年四级作文的特点，即问题解决型+观点对比型的结合。属社会类话题，纵观各个辅导机构的预测作文，没有人预测博物馆的话题。但是就今年的考题形式而言，三个段落的写法在课堂上都讲到了。下面是分析：按照课堂所讲审题阶段应该关注英文标题和汉语提纲，即：1）FreeAdmissiontoMuseums2）汉语提纲3条。从中可知，核心话题是freeadmission,从三个方面来探讨这一话题即可。根据“先结构后表达”的原则安排段落结构即可做到结构清晰：先结构：1、段写该现象的目的（其实就是好处）；2、段写问题（即负面影响）；3、段写看法（或解决措施）后表达：确定好各段结构之后，利用3分钟时间联想各部分可以选用的句式和词汇表达，并以关键词的形式列出以帮助自己理顺写作的思维。写作完成之后，检查。下面为用课堂所讲套路写的简易版本，供大家参考。FreeAdmissiontoMuseums首段版本1：Inrecentyears,anincreasingnumberofmuseumsbecomefreetothepublic.（或：Itcanbenoticedthat...）Thereareseveralaimsforthisphenomenon,butthefollowingmaybethemostcritical.Freeadmissionenablespeople,especiallystudents,tohavemoreopportunitiestovisitmuseums,wheretheycanacquireknowledgeofhistory,arts,customsandsoforth.版本2:AccordingtoarecentsurveybyChinaDaily,about84.3%ofmuseumsbecomefreetothepublic.Bydoingso,museumsattractmillionsofpeopletovisiteveryday.Inaddition,thevisitors,especiallystudents,broadentheirhorizonsandenlargetheirscopeofknowledge.中间段:Thereare,however,severalnegativeeffectswhichwecannotturnablindeyeto.Firstly,owingtofreeadmission,alargenumberofvisitorswillvisitmuseums.Consequently,themuseummaybecometoocrowded.Evenworse,freeadmissionmayresultinsomefinancialproblems.Forinstance,museumworkerscanhardlygetenoughsalary.Lastbutnotleast,thepreservationofculturalheritagemaybeimpaired.尾段：版本1：(课堂讲过的)Personally,Iamconvincedthatfreeadmissiontomuseumisatwo-edgedsword,whichpresentsusbothadvantages?andtroubles.Thebestpolicy,asIseeit,istomaximizethebenefitsandminimizethenegativeinfluences.版本2：Frommypointofview,itishightimethatwetookmeasurestoeliminatethenegativeimpacts.Firstly,regulationsshouldbeworkedouttolimitthenumberofvisitorstomuseumeveryday.Secondly,itisadvisableforgovernmenttoofferfinancialassistancetomuseums.Onlyinthiswaycanmuseumsprovideservicetopublicinabetterway.FreeAdmissiontomuseums越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？也会带来一些问题；你的看法？FreeAdmissiontoMuseums?Nowadays,alotofmuseumsopentothepublicforfree,andalotofp