大学英语四级优秀作文.docx

大学英语四级优秀作文

第一篇：大学英语四级优秀作文大学英语四级考试优秀范文Part1:2010年12月1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该……HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent①Itisbeyondreproachthatchildrenarealwaysconsideredtheappleofparents”eyes,whichisespeciallytrueinsingle-childfamilies.②However,manyparentsgosofarastotakeovereverythingfortheirlifeandstudyeventotheirfuture.③Itisnotunusualtowitnessthatanincreasingnumberofchildrenareaccompaniedbyparentontheirfirstdayincollege.④Ideclareinnouncertaintermsthatitwillendupwiththechildren”slackofindependence.Insuchaworldfulloffiercecompetition,beingindependentbecomesessentialforawould-besuccess.Thus,⑤whatshouldparentsdo?Inmyhumbleopinion,⑥ontheonehand,parentsshouldraisechildreninafree-rangingwayinsteadofbeing“helicopter”parents,whoalwaysseemtohoverovertheirchildren;⑦ontheotherhand,parentsshouldteachchildrentoberesponsiblefortheirownbehaviorsinsteadofmonopolizingeverything.⑧Iclingtothebeliefthatonlywhenparentsrealizewhatisbetterfortheirchildrenandcaretheminarightway,cantheyhelpchildrendevelopindependence.精彩点评：①引入话题：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然过渡：但是，有些父母却为孩子包办一切。③引用生活中的实例，证实父母为孩子包办并非空穴来风。④分析包办所带来的后果。⑤提出问题：父母应该如何做？⑥和⑦具体阐述解决问题的策略，层次分明。⑧简要总结前文所提的具体侧咧，是文章结尾不显突兀。加分亮点：beyondreproach无可非议beaccompaniedby…有……陪同declareinnouncertainterms毫不讳言fiercecompetition激烈的竞争essential至关重要的clingtothebelief坚信Part2:2010年6月1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种现象的原因是……3.为了改变这种状况，我认为……DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpellingNowadays,①anincreasingnumberofstudentsseemtoattachlessimportancetospellinginEnglishlearning.②Thus,numerousmisspellingsappearintheirpapers,③andwhat”sworse,awell-organizedessayisthereforetotallyimpossible.④Therearevariousreasonsresponsibleforthisembarrassingsituation.⑤Foronthing,muchmorestudentsgiveprioritiestooralEnglishatthecostofdosinglessspellingexercises,letalonereflectonwhattheylearnedtheotherday.⑥Foranother,manyteachersputsomuchemphasisoncommunicationandgrammarinteachingthattheyseldomhighlightspelling,andoccasionallyworsestill,theythemselvesarecaughtinspelling.Tochangethissituation,⑦Iholdtothebeliefthatstud