英语小作文.docx

英语小作文

第一篇：英语小作文1、AHappyDay2、ALittleWish3、APenandaPencil4、FlyKites5、FourSeasons6、Haveafunholiday7、ILikeMyVillage8、MyBedroom9、MyBestFriend10、MyBestFriends11、MyDog12、MyDream13、MyEnglishTeacher14、MyFamily115、MyFamily216、MyFamily317、MyFavouriteSport18、MyFavouritestamp19、MyGoodFriend120、MyGoodFriend221、MyGrandfather'sGarden22、MyHometown.23、MyLittleCat24、MyLovelyHome25、MySchool26、MyUncle27、MyWinterHoliday28、Myself29、SpringAHappyDayTheweatherisgettinghotterandhotter.Thesummerholidayiscoming.Whatahappyday!Birdsaresinginginthetrees.Butterfliesaredancinginthegarden.Childrenareplayinginthepark.Someboysareplayingontheslide(滑梯).Someboysarelisteningtomusic.Otherboysarereadingunderthebigtree.Somegirlsaredrawingpictures.Othergirlsareplayingontheswings(秋千).Ilikeroller-skating(滑旱冰)inthesquare.Andmyclassmatesareplayingfootball.Weareveryhappy!点评台：这篇文章描写了同学们和自己在假期里快乐的一天，表达了他们对假期的喜爱以及在假期里自由自在、放松自我的心情。读后有种很想加入他们当中，与他们分享快乐的愿望。整篇文章用词准确，语言生动，中心明确、突出，是一篇很成功的文章。文章级别：A。ALittleWishLook!What'sthat?Itisourhomeland'sspaceship.Thespaceshipisasbrightasthestars.Itcanmove.IamproudofourastronautbecauseIhaveawish.Iwanttobeanastronaut.Inspace,therearemanymaterials.IfIwereanastronaut,Iwillbeabletoknowmoreaboutspace.Ithinkthescenewillbeverygreat.Ontheonehand,Iamgoingtoenjoythesceneoftheearth.Ontheotherhand,Iamgoingtoseesomestars.Thisismywish.Ihopemywishwillcometrue!点评中心：文章题材新颖，标新立意，让我们了解到虽然只是一个小小的愿望但却包含了对探索宇宙的好奇及对我们地球家园的热爱，同时也感受到小作者立志成为一名宇航员的伟大理想。最后希望小作者能够再接再励，写出更多、更优秀的小文章，同时也祝愿你梦想成真！APenandaPencilIhaveapenandapencil.Thepenisverynice,butthepencilissodirty.Oneday,thepenmetthepencil.Thepensaidtothepencil:“Whatadirtypencil!”Thepencilsaid:“Yes.I'mdirty.ButIcanwritewords.”“Icanwritewords，too.Now,let'sseewhocanwritemorewords.”Theybegantowrite.Theywroteandwrote.Thepenwrotelotsofwordsonthepaper.Thepencilwrotelotsofwordsonthepaper,too.Afteralongtime,thepenhadn'tanyink(钢笔水)left(剩下).Thepencilbecameshort,buthecouldstillwrite.Atlast,thepencilwon.Thepencilsaid:“Haha...haha...Whowon,youorme?”Thependrooped(低下)hishead.Thenh