雅思作文!!!_经典.docx

雅思作文!!!_经典

第一篇：雅思作文!!!_经典Impulsiveandeasilyinfluencedasyoungpeopleare,theyareconstantlytrickedbyadvertisementinallformsofmedia.（深刻的）,adverse（不利的）,catastrophic（灾难的）,damaging（破坏性的）,devastating（破坏性的）,dire（可怕的）,disastrous（灾难的）,fatal（致命的）,tragic（悲惨的）,severe（严重的）,canbeseeninallmajorcitiesthousandsofEvenifmachinetranslationwereabletoeradicateallthelanguagebarriersbetweenpeople,wouldtherebenopointinlearningforeignlanguages?Bynomeans.写作思路：1.观点：电脑不会妨碍人和人之间的交流小提示：科技类的文章，尽量选择正观点，讲述科技为人类做出的贡献为佳Communicationandisolationmustnotbedefinedinanarrowsense.Alienationofpeopleisnotcausedbyhowlittletheytalkormeeteachotherbutbylackofinterestinourfellowcreaturesortheworldatlarge.TheInternetkeepsuslinkedtoeachotherallthetime.Everythingisatthetouchofafingertip.Withmoretimespentoncomputersandlesswitheachothers,peoplestarttofearthedehumanizingeffectofthiswonderfulhumancontrivance.提出题目中以及提及到的观点特别提醒：切忌不要重复题目中出现的语句，要适当地paraphrase，用不同的文字，来表达同样的内容亮点：contrivance发明物普通词汇：inventionThisinordinateconcernisquitegroundless.简单地亮出自己的观点。Inordinate过量的beobsessedby…beabsorbedintobefascinatedwithbecrazyaboutbecaptivatedwith…isinmyblood.aretrappedintheirownworldodehumanizingeffectdetrimentaleffectComputerisbutatool,themisuseofwhichitisnotresponsiblefor.Thus,communicationandisolationmustnotbedefinedinanarrowsense.Problemsarisenotfromtechnologicaldevelopmentbutfrompeoplethemselves.Isolationonlyoccurswhenoneisobsessedbyhisownaffairandcaresnothingaboutanythingelse.Notwithstandingtheachievementsandmiraclesmadepossiblebyscience,numerousissuescannotbesolvedbyscienceortechnology.Notwithstanding=despite举例：青少年犯罪juveniledelinquency种族歧视racialdiscrimination道德水平下降moraldegradationdebatablearguableQuestionableModernpeoplearemoreoftenplaguedbyproblemsoftheheart,insteadofthebody.Plague折磨Trouble,bother,haunt,harassThisproblemofairpollutionhashauntedeveryoneinthecity.grantsorscholarshipinterestinordedicationtoinrapidsuccession频频地（快速且连续不断的）燃烧卡路里burncalories锻炼身体的协调能力trainourhand-eye-feetcoordination减肥thebestsportforoverweightpeople（2）骑车