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雅思写作

第一篇：雅思写作雅思写作范文Childrenfinditdifficulttoconcentrateonorpayattentiontotheirstudyinschool.Whatarethereasons?Howcanwesolvethisproblem?孩子难以在学习上集中注意力。原因是什么？如何解决？参考范文：Itisnotuncommontohearthecomplaintthatchildrennowadaysareeasilydistractedfromwhattheyaresupposedtodoinclass.Thefactorsresponsibleforthisproblemandfeasiblesolutionsaccordinglywillbeanalyzedinthisreport.Amongallthepossiblereasons，theexcessiveapplicationofelectronicproductsinschoolshouldbeartheblame.ChildrenbornandraisedinthisdigitalagehavebeenaccustomedtokeepingintouchwiththeoutsideworldthroughtheirsmartphonesoriPad.Asaresult，varioussocialmediaandmobilegameAPPsbringtheworldclosertothembutdampentheirenthusiasmonabsorbingknowledgeandskills.Toexpandtheirattentionspaninclassandsolvethisproblem，therearesomemeasuresthatneedtobetakenintoconsideration.Itisadvisableforteachers，whousuallyfunctionasthemonitorsandmanagersoftheclass，tosetrulesaboutphoneusing.Forexample，anyonecaughtusingelectronicproductsfornon-academicpurposesmorethanthreetimeswillbegivenan“F”inthefinalexam.Thiscanbringanimmediateandtangibleoutcomewithinashorttime.Inaddition，distractingstudentsfromscreensbacktothewhiteboardisalsoawayworthtrying.Someactivitiesdesignedforraisingenergylevelofstudentssoastogetthembetterinvolvedinclasscanbeappliedwisely，likerole-play，mingling，seminaretc.Thesekindofactivitiesconvertthetraditionallyteacher-centeredteachingpatternintothestudent-centeredoneandconsequentlycompetewithphonesforstudent’sinterestandattention.Inconclusion，theabuseofelectronicproductsintheclassroomistherootcauseofstudents'attentionissuesandtheresponsibilityofsparingstudentsfromthisproblemfallsonteachers.北京英培教育第二篇：雅思写作翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析，大家会发现考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面展开：内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentencestructure)。同时，据笔者的长期观察，高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。”下面，笔者将从以上四方面一一阐述烤鸭们写作时存在的盲点所在并提出相应的建议。一、内容(content)：切中主题，自圆其说盲点1：无话可说这类考生在看到题目时，最初的感觉是脑袋中一片空白。雅思作文题材广泛，包括科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。而且由于文化差异以及学习工作的缘故，日