高一英语写作训练（五篇范文）.docx

高一英语写作训练（五篇范文）

第一篇：高一英语写作训练高一英语冯蕊2013.11.30高一英语写作讲义(一)第一次月考作文分析题目：假定你叫张华。一家英文报社来信要邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况，并依照调查写一篇报道。请根据下表提供的信息，对你的调查作简要介绍，发给报社。主要的用途：1.阅读国内外新闻，学习英语。2.发email、欣赏音乐、看电影、玩游戏等。3.网上购物。出现的问题：1.过多地在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业。2.浏览不健康信息，对身心有害。范文：Asweallknow,theInternetisplayinganimportantpartinourdailylife.WecandomanythingsbytheInternet.Forexample,wecanreadthenewsaroundtheworld,learnEnglish,writee-mails,listentomusic,seeafilmandplaycomputergamesontheInternet.Oh,wecangoshoppingbytheInternet,too.Soitisveryusefulforus.Butatpresent,theInternetalsohasmanydisadvantages.Becausemanyteenagersspendtoomuchtimeonplayingcomputergames,theyhavesolesstimetostudythattheirstudygradesgetworse.It’saveryseriousproblem.SomepeoplelookthroughunhealthynewsbytheInternet.Itcaninfluenttheirmindsandthemselves.Inmyopinion,weshouldmakegooduseoftheInternetandformagoodhabittousetheInternet.Ithinkyoucandoit.(二)三步作文法1.Listthekeypoints罗列出关键点haveaccesstolearnnewsathomeandabroadaswellaslearningEnglishsende-mails,enjoymusic,seefilms,playcomputergamesdoonlineshoppingspendtoomuchtimeinplayingcomputergamesonline（beburiedin）wastetime/affecttheirstudies（doharmto）2.Makesentences造句TheycannotonlyreadnewsathomeandabroadbutalsolearnEnglishbytheInternet.WiththehelpoftheInternet,theycanhaveaccesstolearningthelatestnewsathomeandabroadaswellaslearningEnglish.3.Formapassageandpolish形成作文并修改完善(三)写作小技巧满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。高考大纲中常用的连接词有以下几类：并列补充关系：what’smore,besides,also,aswell,moreover,furthermore,inaddition等等。转折对比关系：but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,although,differentfrom,incontrastto,inspiteof,unlike,nevertheless,notonly…butalso,yearsago…today,theformer…thelatter,then…now,theonce…now,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand,some…others等等。因果关系：since,as,because(of),for,so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat条件关系：if,onthecondition(that),aslongas,unless,orelse等等。时间关系：when,after,before,until,assoonas,later,afterwards,soon,lately,recently,since,fromthenon,inthemeantime,then,suddenly,atthesametime,next,ear