托福写作擅用名词化小诀窍.docx

托福写作擅用名词化小诀窍

托福写作擅用名词化小诀窍A谓语动词的宾语部分。原句：Idonotknoweitherwhatshemeantorwhatheintends.名词化：Idonotknoweitherhermeaningorhisintentions.B结合被动形式原句：Ifpeopledecidewithoutenoughpersuasiveinformation，...名词化：Ifadecisionismadewithoutenoughpersuasiveinformation，...C取代诸如从句中“thefactthat”的用法原句：ThefactthatIdeniedwhatheaccusedmeofimpressedthejury.名词化：Mydenialofhisaccusationsimpressedthejury.更好的.名词化：a.WhenIdeniedhisaccusations，Iimpressedthejury.b.Indenyinghisaccusations，Iimpressedthejury.D名词化部分用在thereis/are的后面原句：Wedemandthatthegovernmentstoptaxingentertainment.名词化：Thereisademandforanendtotaxationonentertainment.原句：Thefloodsconsiderablyerodedtheland.名词化：Therewasconsiderableerosionofthelandfromthefloods.然而，有些时候，在我们的思维方式中认为理所应当使用“名词化”时，老外认为是没有必要的。比如：A名词化部分跟在动词后面原句（名词化“冗余”）：Thepoliceconductedaninvestigationintothematter.改后：Thepoliceinvestigatedthematter.B名词化部分作为主语原句：Ourdiscussionisconcernedwithataxcut.改后：Wediscussedataxcut.C连续进行名词化原句：a.First，shereviewedtheevolutionofthedorsalfin.b.Therewasafirstareviewoftheevolutionofthedorsalfin.改后：First，shereviewedhowthedorsalfinevolved.D连接部分名词化原句：Theircessationofhostilitieswasbecauseoftheirpersonnellosses.改后：Theyceasedhostilitiesbecausetheylostpersonnel.原句：Theinstabilityofthemotorhousingdidnotprecludethecompletionofthefieldtrials.改后：Eventhoughthemotorhousingwasunstable，theresearchstaffcompletedthefieldtrials.