雅思写作解析.docx

雅思写作解析

雅思写作范文解析 雅思的写作技总结起来有三点分别是：避免空洞的单词和词组、避免重复、选择最恰当的语法结构。下面小编为大家整理了雅思的写作范文，以供大家学习参考。 题目如下: Ascountriesdevelop,moreandmorepeoplebuyanduseprivatecars.Dotheadvantagesofthistrendforinpidualsoutweighdisadvantagesfortheenvironment?20160915 读题之后,恐怕很多考生都简单地将此题默认为一般的优缺点对比题了,其实稍仔细些不难发现,本题的advantages和disadvantages后面有明显的限制性的定语.这无疑就在很大程度上限制了大家论点的范围.例如,通常我们认为私家车的普及会给我们带来更多的就业机会和经济繁荣.这一论点,明显不符合本题要求.此外,私家车普及的缺点其一是导致了道路交通安全隐患.同样,这个论点也不能在本文中出现.本题目通过两个限制性的定语,很大程度上限定了烤鸭们可以选择的论点.此类的大作文题目尽管不算太多,但是也需要考生们极其注意.稍后在本文后面,笔者会列举近年有类似限制性定语的.题目供大家参考. Withsurprisingpopularityofprivatecars,greatconveniencebroughtbyuseofprivatevehiclesandoverlyhighenvironmentalcostarebothwhatpeopleareconfrontedwithsatisfyinglyandreluctantly.Thus,somepeoplebegintorethinkwhetherhumanssacrificetoomuchenvironmentalcostinordertoenjoytheconveniencederivedfromusageoftheirowncars. 只要审题阶段没有偏离主题,其实本题论证起来并不算难.开头段通过背景介绍和点题的方式引出全文,可谓中规中矩.此段并没有准确表达出笔者的观点,这个在真正的写作中是被允许的. Privatecarsmakepeople’slivesfairlydifferentfromlivesweusedtolive.Duringhourswhenpublictransportscannotofferservice,drivingprivatecarswillsurelybethefirstandthemostpossiblechoice.Inordertogettosomeplaceshardlyreachedbypublictransports,peoplehavenootherwayexceptusingtheirowncars.Havingroadtripswithfamilymembershasalreadybecomeapopularrecreationalactivityacrossallnations.Peopleespeciallyyounggenerationcannotimaginehowtheirliveswouldbewithoutprivatecars. 主段一,笔者重点论述了私家车给人们生活带来的便利.换言之,本段就是聚焦于这个事实的优点. Theenvironmentalcostpeoplearepayingforusageofcarsshouldneverbeignored.Noisefromtransportandbadairqualitycausedbytailgasarewhatpeoplelivingincitieshavetosufferfromintheirdailylife.Actually,bothkindsofpollutioncanbeattributedtotheconsumptionoffossilfuelthatisfuellingmajorityvehiclesonthisplanet.Assoonasauthoritiespullthetriggerforutilizingcleanfuelforprivatecarssuchascarspoweredbyelectricityorbio-ethanol,theenvironmentalcostisabletobediminishedsubstantially. 与主段一相呼应,本段着重于阐述私家车在环境方面造成的问题.并且通过提供方案的形式来说明,这些环境问题是可被解决的.言外之意,既是这些缺点并不可怕,也并不重要 Asiswidelyaccepted,inthispresen