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托福满分作文惯用的4种结尾
摘要：一篇让托福写作考官满意的作文，不光要有一个漂亮的开头，一个精彩的结尾对于这篇文章而言同样重要。有不少的考生认为，只要有好的开头就好，考官不会认真看结尾部分。其实你错了，写作也一样需要善始善终。有一个精彩的结尾也能让你的托福写作增色不少。如果你想要明天考试托福写作满分，不妨尝试一下以下4种结尾招式。满分作文惯用的4种结尾：写作招式一：回答问题E.g.1Whenacountrydevelopsitstechnology;thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflifedieout.Itispointlesstotryandkeepthemalive.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?Inconclusion,withoutsuggestingthatalltechnologyisnecessarilygood,Ithinkitisbynomeans‘pointless’,inanyway,totrytokeeptraditionsalivewithtechnology.Weshouldnotignoretechnology,becauseitcanbeourfriendandsupportourwayoflife.这个结尾段落明确地提出了自己的观点，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。写作招式二：不要添加新的信息E.g.2Happinessisconsideredtobeveryimportantinlife.Whyisitdifficulttodefine?Whatfactorsareimportantinachievinghappiness?Likeself-awareness，thisisalsoverydifficulttoachieve’butIthinkthesearethetwofactorsthatmaybethemostimportantforachievinghappiness.用一句话明确自己的观点，幸福很难定义，可能有两个因素起到作用。广告时间：参加马叔托福保分班的童鞋，9月5日的保分成绩出来啦想考100+的宝宝们，还不快快入群~写作招式三：2-3个句子为宜E.g.3Somepeoplebelievethatchildren’sleisureactivitiesmustbeeducational;otherwisetheyareacompletewasteoftime.Doyouagreeordisagree?Finally,Ithinkitisalsoimportanttorememberthatchildrenneedtorelaxaswellaswork.Ifeverythingtheydomusthavesomeeducationaloracademicrelevance,thentheywillsoongettiredofstudyingaltogether,whichisthelastthingparentswouldwant.两句话，作者的态度很明确，学生不可能花所有的时间去学习，否则就会完全失去对学习的兴趣，所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。一般在结尾段的最开始部分，考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词，让考官了解文章已经进入尾声了。这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句：信号词：Finally，tosumup，inconclusion，inbrief，therefore，thus，overall句型：1.itcanbeconcludedthat…2.wecanfindthat…3.Ithinkitisalsoimportanttorememberthat4.themainpointistomakesurethat5.Ibelievethat/Personally，Ithinkthat/Iwouldsaythat/Iagreethat/Myviewisthat写作招式四：可采用的技巧1.总结式(重述前文)把在前文中的观点在结尾段进行重述，但是不能出现与开头段或者题目中的单词重复。E.g.4*Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehaviour.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauseofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?Perhapsparentingclassesareneededtohelpthemtodothis,andhighqualitynurseryschoolscouldbeest