文章结构和思路.pdf

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Case1-1DigressionfromtheTopic

CaseStudy

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutes

towriteacompositiononthetopicWhyPeople

GotoCollege.Yourcompositionshouldgive
文章结构和思路存在的问题
thereasons.

WhyPeopleGotoCollege英国英语要求
开始段
用。
引出文章要讨论的主题Inthelastfewyears,therehasbeenbelieve

adramaticincreaseinthenumberofhigh

schoolgraduateswhowanttogotocollege.

介绍他人观点Thepublicbelievesthatthehigher

educationaldegreewillpromiseyoubetter

jobsandmorehappiness.Contrarytothe
作者提出的
本文中心思想句，提出本人观点popularthought,Iholdacompletely
中心思想不
differentpointofview.
符合命题要
中间段Thereareanumberofreasonsformy
求。
介绍文章展开的方法choice.Tobeginwith,togotocollegeis

第一个论点nottheonlywayofbecomingthepillarof

oursociety.Basedonindividual

conditions,every-onehashisorherown

uniquemethod.Somelearneffectivelyfrom应该加上连
self-studyandpractice,somefromsocial接词while。
experiences,∧othersprefertoobtain

knowledgefrombooksandschools.For

第二个论点another,differentpostsrequirepeople

withvariouseducationalbackgroundand

experiences.Takesanitationworkersfor

example.Theyareexpectedtoexercise

diligenceratherthanbearinghighacademic

第三个论点degrees.Finally,Idoubtifallthepeople

withhigheducationalbackgroundcanbring

theirbestout.Iftheycannot,isitawaste

notonlyforthetalentsthemselves,butalso

foroursociety?Asagoodexampleofthis,

Ioftenquotethedishearteninglife
unshakable
experienceofoneofmyrelatives.Afterher
过于绝对
four-yearcollegelife,shewenttotakethe
化，显得作
positionasatypewriter.Isn’tthisabit
者武断而主
harsh?Butthisishowthingsare.
观。
结尾段Theevidenceuponallsidesleadstoan
unshakableideathatitcomesasnosurprise
thattogotocollegeisnotnecessaryatall.

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Case1-2LackofRealSubstance

CaseStudy

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirty
minutestowriteacompositiononthe

文章结构和思路topicMyNewCompositionInstructor.存在的问题

MyNewCompositionInstructor

此文的开始
第一段He’sneithertallnorshort,neitherfat
段没有写
叙述第一印象和描写体貌特征northin,neithertoooldnortooyoung,
好，读者不
neitherhandsomenorugly.Ifanexpression
得要领。
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