CET4作文辅导：Every-coin-has-two-sides.docx

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CET4作文辅导：Everycoinhastwosides

CrackingCET在本期四六级考试专栏中，全国四六级考委会的夏国佐教授对读者题为“Recreationalactivities”的作文进行了讲评和改写。这是2021年6月份的四级作文试题。按照四级作文评分标准，作文部分满分15分，这篇文章得14分。如果你希望自己的文章得到夏教授的点评，请按下面要求写出一篇短文，发到[e-mail]。Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled“Recreationalactivities”.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.娱乐活动多种多样。2.娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害。3.作为大学生，我认为……读者原文RecreationalactivitiesLonggonearethedayswhenstudentscamehomefromschool,didtheirhomework,previewedthecontentofthenextdayandthenwenttobedat9o’clock.Today,thereisaworldofrecreationalactivitiesouttherewaitingforyou,withcountlesschoicesfromseeingamoviefollowedupwitharomanticdinnerwithyourgirlfriend,tojusthangingaroundwithyourfellowschattingandlaughing.Andit’salluptoyouhowtochoosefromallkindsofactivities.Recreationalactivitiescancertainlybringusgood,asweallknowforsure.Withsomuchpressureuponourshoulders,wedefinitelyneedchancestorelax.Besides,somerecreationalactivities,sayaconcert,canbroadenourhorizonsaswellasentertainus,whichismorethanperfect.Buteverycoinhastwosides,astheoldsayinggoes.Recreationalactivitiescanalsobringusharm.Fartooaddictedtoonlinegames,manystudentsfailedintheirexamsandsomeareevenexpelled.Furthermore,activitieswhicharenotproperforuscanalsoaffectuspsychologically.Failedtowinabattleinthevirtualworldonline,a14-year-oldboyendedupsuicide,whichisreallyhorrible.Asacollegestudent,Ithinkweshouldchooseourrecreationalactivitiesproperlyandhaveabettercontroloverourselves,whichmeansweshouldfirstofallknowwhatisgoodforusandwhatisnot,andthenavoidgettingaddictedtoitnomatterhowmuchweenjoyit.Andifwedoso,Ibelieveourrecreationalactivitieswillbemorecolorful,aswellasbeneficial.修改后的文章RecreationalactivitiesGonearethedayswhenstudentscamehomefromschool,didtheirhomework,previewedlessonsforthenextdayandthenwenttobedat9o’clock.Today,thereisagreatvarietyofrecreationalactivitiesouttherewaitingforyou,fromseeingamoviewithyourgi