2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文及点评.docx

2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文及点评

第一篇：2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文及点评2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文范文及点评题目：Createagreencampus1.建设绿色校园十分重要2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该……新东方版范文(一)Itisofgreatimportancetomakeandmaintainagreencampusinouruniversityorcollege.Obviously,agrowingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethatitisourdutytodothatinthepresentdays,sincetheconceptof“agreenworld”hasbecomethefocusofthesociety.Theideaof“agreencampus”isbeyondagreenenvironment.Tobeginwith,thedevelopmentonthecampusistobesustainableandrecyclable.Someoftheauthorities'budgetshouldbeonhowtoreduceofthewaste.What'smore,we'dbetterbeawareoftheseriousnessofpollutionaroundus.Thustheideaofenvironmentalprotectionmaybecomeacommonoccurrenceinourdailylife.Itisnecessarythateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentoprotectourcampusfromwasteandpollution,andhencetheseactivitiesaretoplayanincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Certainly,thereislittledoubtthatfurtherconsiderationmustbepaidtoourgreencampuses.(字数：167)点评：本次作文还是延续四级一贯成熟的风格，偏重校园生活。当然也结合了时下流行的话题，绿色环保。上面这篇文章尽管有些不妥当之处，但能较好的符合四级考试作文的核心：无论题目怎么变，都是以考察学生的语言为核心，不是考查思维和知识面的。所以只需关注语言的应用就行了。还是可以灵活套用固定的套路，中心句＋逻辑词的方式，做到不变应万变。相信大多数同学应该能够习惯的应用新路老方法走的思路。但是，还是这句话，无错表达才是四级语言表达合格的核心。新东方版范文(二)Inrecentyears,extravaganceandwastehavebecomeincreasinglyseriousinsomeoftheuniversitycampus.Wecanseethatpapers,bottlesandcansarethrownawayafteruse;foodiswastedjustbecauseofitspoortaste;clothesarediscardedsimplyowingtotheiroldfashion.Asaconsequence,peopleinmountingnumbersputgreatemphasisoncreatingagreencampus.Thereareatleasttwocriteriatodistinguishwhatisgreencampus.Ontheonehand,naturalresourcesmustbeconservedandmadefulluseof,forexample,we,ascollegestudents,shouldtakethewiseuseofpapersandsecond-handtextbooksintoaccount.Ontheotherhand,educationtobuildupthrifthabitsmustbepromotedbyrelevantdepartmentsandprofessionalsatvariouslevels.Accordingly,itisnecessaryforustotakeeffectivesteps.Foronething,universityauthoritiesshouldrespondwiththedemandformorerigidconservationofournaturalresources,suchaswater,electricity,andsoon.Foranother,we