2011考研作文(2012考研英语作文).docx

2011考研作文(2012考研英语作文)

第一篇：2011考研作文(2012考研英语作文)Asisshownabove,onthelakefloatsaboat,onwhichonecoupleoftouristsarethrowingwasteintothelake,whichhasbeeninamessandfullofvariouswastesincludinglunchboxes,fishboneanditslike.Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionabouttheproblemthepicturecarriesinthenewspaperrecently.Thepicture,atthefirstglimpse,seemstobesimple,butonlyapenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitsuperficialmeaning.Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwithenvironmentprotection.Nobady(拼写错误Nobody)darefailtoattachdueattentionto（给予了适当的注意。）Thesignificanceofenvironmentprotection(建议使用：environmentalprotection).Tobeginwith,environmentprotection（protectingenvironment）canbringusacomfortableatmosphere.Additionally,itputsoursocietyinharmoniousposition,promotingmutualunderstanding,enhancingfriendlytiesandshorteningthegapbetweenpeople.Consequently,theconflictsandtensionscouldberelievedbydoingso.Weretherenoenvironmentprotection（建议使用：Wereindifferenttothedestructionofenvironment）,hardlycanwetastethewonderofourlife.Tosolvethisburningproblem,itisimperativeforpeopletoattachattentionto（建议使用：pourfocuson）thesignificanceofenvironmentprotection.Moreover,thegeneralpublicissupposedtoenhancetheirawarenessthatenvironmentprotectionplayacrucialroleinourlife.Inbrief,onlyinareasonable,prosperousandhealthyatmospherecanwehopetowitnesstheidealsceneinwhichpeoplecanenjoytheirlifetotheuttermost.点评：以上作文系vip作文班学员所写（cet6——608分，某985重点高校学生），总体来讲，此作文得分在14分左右。不足之处：（1）environmentprotection一词出现频率过高，建议用其他词予以代替，比如：protectingenvironment,environmentalprotection.（2）Nobady拼写错误应改为：Nobody，一篇高分作文可能因为某个简单的单词拼写错误，而给阅卷老师留下不好的印象。（3）Thepicture使用频率过高，建议使用cartoon,image,picture,drawing等。2012年考研英语作文预测（仅供参考）大作文：（1）正面（正确、积极的）：01、02、03、08、10反面（不正确的做法、消极）：04、05、06、07、09、11（2）一幅图还是两幅图（04、06）（3）作文有无规定题目（仅02）（4）1st：描述图画，2nd:解释图画要表达的含义，3rd：严重性及采取的举措。例如：2011环境污染；2010：一个火锅——多种文化＊2012重点预测正面小作文：重点书信第二篇：2014考研英语作文第一段结构：万能句+图画描述句+过渡句+中心句万能句：1.Therehavebeenaheateddiscussionaboutapicture(asetofpictures)inthenewspaperatpresent.2.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedt