托福写作欣赏.docx

托福写作欣赏

第一篇：托福写作欣赏托福写作范文欣赏：anewuniversityinyourcommunity摘要：新托福考试写作如果考生想拿高分，脑子里一定要有几篇文章，背上几篇范文，能以备不时只需。托福写作是中国考生的弱项，只有在日常生活中多读些范文，了解托福写作中的逻辑思新托福考试写作如果考生想拿高分，脑子里一定要有几篇文章，背上几篇范文，能以备不时只需。托福写作是中国考生的弱项，只有在日常生活中多读些范文，了解托福写作中的逻辑思维，才可更好的进行锻炼。下面我们一起欣赏这篇托福写作范文。这篇托福独立写作满分范文的主要内容是讨论了如果政府宣布计划兴建一所新的大学，而有些人认为你所在的社区是个建大学的好地方，那么请你也对比一下在你所在的社区建新大学的好处和坏处。Thegovernmenthasannouncedthatitplanstobuildanewuniversity.Somepeoplethinkthatyourcommunitywouldbeagoodplacetolocatetheuniversity.Comparetheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofestablishinganewuniversityinyourcommunity.Usespecificdetailsinyourdiscussion.①优点：学生上学方便;促进当地的教育发展②优点：促进当地产业发展，提供就业岗位③缺点：本区很多老人，将极大影响他们的生活，其他人的生活也不再安宁④缺点：交通、环境问题转自:考试网-[Examw.Com]Mycommunityislocatedinaquietandsmalltownwithverybeautifulnaturalsceneries.Theenvironmentisverysuitableforanewuniversity.Everyoneinmycommunitywouldwithoutdoubtenjoyasenseofpridewheninformedthatanewuniversitywillbebuilthere.However,justasanyotherconstructions,thisactionwillbringmanyadvantagesaswellasdisadvantagestomycommunity.Themostessentialandexcitingadvantageisthatanewuniversitywilldefinitelyenhancetheeducationonalllevelsinmycommunity.Usually,childrenlivingnearbyauniversitywouldfrequentlyvisitorplayintheuniversity,andthustheycanbeunconsciouslyinfluencedbytheacademicenvironment.Thisinfluencemightbemoreeffectivetothemthananypreachfromtheirparentsabouttheimportanceofstudying.Bybuildinganewuniversity,childreninmycommunitywilldevelopagreatermotivationforstudyinghard.Moreover,withauniversitylocatednearby,alltheprimaryschools,middleschoolswillhaveagreatersenseofcompetition.Theteachersmayencouragethestudentstoworkhardertogetauniversitydegree,sinceitwouldbeveryembarrassingthatthestudentsoftheirowncommunitycouldnotbeadmittedbythenewuniversity.Besides,anewuniversityinmycommunitywillboomthelocaleconomy.Asweallknow,universitiesarealwayssurroundedbyawiderangeofstores,restaurantsandmarketswhichprovideservicestothestudentsandfaculty.Thusitisverylikelythatthenewuniversitywillencouragethelocalresidentstooffertheir