雅思9分满分大作文赏析.docx

雅思9分满分大作文赏析

第一篇：雅思9分满分大作文赏析雅思9分满分大作文赏析在雅思班，我惊喜的发现我教了十年雅思，居然碰到了难得一见的9分文章，我给了几位前任的IELTSExaminer打了分数，都给出了9分。我们来欣赏一下：范文：Globalizationisadeclarationofwaruponallothercultures.Andinculturewars,thereisnoexemptionofcivilians,therearenoinnocentbystanders.Whyshoulditbeexpectedthatancientandrootedcivilizationsaregoingtoacceptthisperipheralisationwithoutastruggle?Theanswertothatisthatglobalizationcarriesanimplicitpromisethatitwillrelievepovertyandoffersecurity—perhapsthemostancientofhumandreams.Becauseofthepowerofglobalcapitalismtocreatewealth,itisassumedthatthisprioritymustsweepasideallotherhumanpreoccupations,includingallexistinginstitutions,interpretationsandsearchesformeaningintheworld.Itisdisingenuoustoassumethateconomy,societyandcultureoperateinseparatespheres.Thissuggeststhat,one,exposedtotheglobalizingimperative,noaspectofsociallife,customarypractice,traditionalbehaviourwillremainthesame.Therehavebeen,broadly,twoprincipalresponsesintheworld,whichwemaycallthefatalisticandtheresistant.ItissignificantthatamongthemostfatalistichavebeentheleadersofG-7,Ex-PresidentClintonsaidglobalizationisafactnotapolicychoiceTonyBlairsaiditisinevitableandirreversible.Itmaybeconsideredparadoxicalthattheleadersofthemostdynamicandexpandingeconomiesintheworldoffersuchapassive,unchallengingviewofwhatare,afterall,human-madearrangements.Theseareamongtherichestandmostproactiveregimes,whichcanwageendlesswaronthegreatabstraction,thatisterror,toppleregimesandlaydownoneWTOlawforthepoorandanotherforthemselves.Istheirhelplessnessinthepresenceofthesemightyeconomicandculturalpowers?Therearetwoaspectstoresistance.Oneisthereassertionoflocalidentities—eveniflocalactuallymeansspreadoververylargepartsoftheworld.Thereclaimingofthelocalisoftenfocusedinthefieldofculture—music,songsanddance.Thissuggestsanattempttoguaranteeitfromtheeffectsofeconomicintegration;akindofcordonsanitariasetuparoundadwindlingculture.Somepeoplebelieveitispossibletogetthebestofbothworld—theyaccepttheeconomicadvantagesofglobalizationandseekt