高考英语书面表达书信和通知辅导教案.docx

高考英语书面表达书信和通知辅导教案

第一篇：高考英语书面表达书信和通知辅导教案高考英语书面表达书信和通知辅导教案【题例一】书面表达：(NMET1999)假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图（图片无法显示，见《高考纠错本英语》一书，下同），给他写一封回信，介绍你校的变化。注意：1．回信须包括图画的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯。2．词数100左右。DearMrSmith,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.①Yes,you’reright,inthepastthreeyearsgreatchangeshappenedinmyschool.There②isonlyoneschoolbuildinginmyschoolthreeyearsago,butnow,thereisanothernewbuilding③attheeastofourschoolandalibrary④attheweast⑤whereusedtobemyplayground.Thenewplaygroundisbuilt⑥outofmyschoolage.⑦Somyschoolbecomeslargerthanbefore.Alsoaroundmyschooltherearelotsoftreeswhichareplantedbyourselves.⑧Now,myschoolbecomeslargeandbeautiful.Ihopesomedayyoucancometomyschool.⑨We’llwelcomeyou!Bestwishes,Yours,LiHua【误点及纠错】1．短语句子不符习惯【纠错】本文要点基本齐全,但在表达中有些层次不清,且有多处语法和用法不当的错误.①第二句话Yes,you’reright,inthepastthreeyearsgreatchangeshappenedinmyschool.中,有用词搭配错误，change不能与happen一起使用，happen应改为takeplace,而且此处时态应该用完成时和时间状语inthepastthreeyears呼应。改后的句子为：Yes,you’reright,inthepastthreeyearsgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyschool.②第二段第一句中is应改为was.③attheeastofourschool应改为intheeastofourschool.④attheweast应改为inthewest,weast是拼写错误。⑥age是明显的拼写错误，应该是gate,这种错误应尽量避免；outofmyschoolgate指的是大门外，不妥。把outof改成infrontof或outside较好。⑧Now,myschoolbecomeslargeandbeautiful这句话可改为：Now,myschoolbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.理由同⑦。⑨We’llwelcomeyou!应改为:Youarewelcome!又如“题例二”③getto是固定词组。⑤writedown是固定词组，意为“记下”。⑥“在吃午饭时”，应用介词短语。⑧“toone’sjoy”是固定词组，意为“令某人高兴的是。”⑨another意为“又一”。又如“题例三”①raise相当于lift,指把某物位置升高；improve相当于http://iconthegrass.Iatetoomuch,soIcouldn’tfinishmysandwich.AsIdidn’tknowwhattodowithit,Iaskedmysisterforadvice.Shepointedatthenotice,whichsaid,“Nolitter.”Andsheaskedmetothrowthesandwichintothelitter-basket.JustthenIsawanelephantcomingslowlytowardsus.Suddenlyanideacameintomymind.IcouldfeedtheelephantwithmysandwichandIdidsointheend.Seeingthis,mysistersmiledandsaid,“Howcleveryouare!”2.DearAlex,HereismysuggestionaboutyourjourneyduringthelongNationalDayholidays.OnOctober1,youmaytakethe8:00flighttoBeijing.Youaretovis