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(完整word)雅思大作文修改
(完整word)雅思大作文修改
(完整word)雅思大作文修改
Governmentshouldspendmoneyontherailwayratherthantheroads.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?

AsthetimegoesbywentonWearetalkingaboutapresentstate.
,thequalityoflifeisrapidlyrisingandhasbroughtaboutamassiveinfluenceinthediversityofthesocietyhaschangedalotandthequalityofourdailylifeisrisingrapidly。paraphrase
Transportationisoneofthekeypointsofimprovementineverysociety.Inthisregard,somepeoplearguethatthegovernmentshouldspendmoneyontherailwayratherthantheroads.I，asanadvocateofchange，totallyagreewiththiscannotagreewiththatpleasecheckyourprevioussentence.Thisphraseactuallymeansthatyouareagainstrailwayimprovement.BECAREFUL.Thisisveryimportant.
idea.anymore。Poorchoiceofword.irrelevant
Therearesomereasonsasfollowed。unnecessary


Tobeginwith,railwayscanitBespecificforthisisalreadyanewparagraph.
reducedthepollutionsinceanincreasingrephrase
ifanumberofpeoplewouldgiveupdrivingtoworkandturnopttorideatrain.Nowadays,peoplespendagreatamountsofrephrase
ampletimeontheroadespeciallyduringtherushhours。Atthesametime,Inaddition，theemissionofcarsbringsagreatbecarefulwithgrammar.Rephrase.
compellingincreasecontributiontoanalreadypollutedamountofpollutioninourparaphrase
environment.Italsoaddsontothedailystressofpeoplebecausetheytendtobeupseteasilyiftheygotintoaparaphraseplease
duetothetrafficjamforalongtime。Researcheshavealsoshownthatwhencarsareimmobilestoppedchooseabettersynonym
,moreairpollutionisproducedwouldbemadechooseasynonym
。Theseproblemscanbeavoidedifrailwayswillbethefocusoftransportationdevelopment.isreallyagoodwaytosolvethisproblemparaphrase
。

What’smore，itsolvesthecongestionontheroadasmanypeoplewerecommutedbytrain。Recentyears，thenumberofthecarsrunningontheroadisincreasinginahighspeed,asaresult，aquestionisgiventousthatalotofcarsareovervolumed,sothatthetrafficjamhasbecomeahorribleproblem.However,thetrainwouldtakemostofthepeopletotheirdestinationwithoutwaitingontheroad.Thisparagraphbasicallyjustrepeatedyo