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2021年考研英语作文:用简洁来修饰
好的写作，首先而且至关重要的一点就是简洁。繁冗的写作堆砌了许多无用的词藻，反而减弱表述的清晰度。当然，也不能仅仅因为简短就认为短句一定优于长句。只要一个单词确实能起到一定的作用，它就应该留在句中。一般来说，只有在进行强调或修饰、美化句子时，才能使用重复的单词、语音和短语。修改文章，就是要删繁就简。例一【原】Itmakesmefeelpainfultothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek.【改】Itpainsmetothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek.例二【原】ItwillbeouraimtoensureproperhealthcareforeachandeveryoneoftheChinesepeople【改】OuraimistoensureproperhealthcareforallChinese.例三【原】Thisbookwillhelpyoumasterthebasicelementsofgoodwriting【改】Thisbookwillhelpyoumasterthebasicsofgoodwriting例四【原】Thesearchoftheforestthattheyconductedwasentirelycomplete【改】Thesearchoftheforestwascomplete例五【原】Wheneveranyonetelephonedhertoaskherforhelpwiththeirhomeworkshealwaysobligedrightaway.【改】Sheimmediatelyobligedanyonewhotelephonedforhelpwithhomework.