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环保作文

第一篇：环保作文高三英语作文训练（四）环境保护编写：张美美张静审核：殷培玲基础指导：衔接过渡一使用过渡性词语1.表示递进关系的过渡词besides,inaddition,moreover,what’smore,what’sworse,etc.2.表示转折对比的关系词but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,despite,inspiteof,whereas(鉴于；然而；反之),nevertheless(然而；尽管如此),etc.3.表示结果的过渡词so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,etc.4.表示换一种方式表达的过渡词inotherwords,thatistosay,toputitanotherway(换个方式来说)5.表示普遍规律generallyspeaking,ingeneral,allinall6.表示总结性的过渡词inaword,ingeneral,inshort,tosumup,finally,inconclusion,insummary7.表示特定顺序关系的过渡词first,firstly,aboveall,firstofall,then,next,intheend,atlast,eventually二使用过渡性句子1.设问引出下文2.总体陈述不同观点，如Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowardsit引起下文。3.举实例佐证。如take…forexample引起下文三跟踪演练：使用恰当的过渡词，重新修改文章TVandwebsiteTVandwebsitearepopularmedia.Theyhavesomethingincommon.Bothofthemmakemoneyfromads.Websitesalsohavedifferentsections.Youmaychoosetheoneyouaremostinterestedin.Theyaredifferentinmanyways.MovingpicturesareshownonTVwithsoundandinterpretation.Itmakesyoufeelthatyouarejustonthespot.Theprogramschangeeveryday.ProfessionalTVreportersdothereportforTV.Someinformationonwebsiteschangeallthetime.Notallofitissoupdated.Everybodycanwritearticlesforwebsitesratherthanprofessionalreporter.Everymediumhasitsownfeatures.Itishardtosaywhichisbetter.修改后的文章：话题写作环境保护必背词汇：1.环境污染的原因cutdowntrees砍伐树木throwlitter乱扔垃圾pollutetheenvironment/air污染环境/空气lead/water/noise/air/whitepollution铅/水/噪音/空气/白色污染giveoff/sendoutsmokeandpoisonousgasesintotheair排放烟雾和有毒气体pourwastewaterintoriverswithoutbeingtreated往河里排放未经处理的废水2.破坏环境的后果acidrain酸雨abnormalclimate气候异常globalwarming，sealevelrisegreenhouseeffect，extinctionofanimals,beendangered,dieout,becomeextinctspecies,beharmfulto/doharmto...,floodintoposeagreatthreatto,befrombadtoworse，floodmanylow-lyingcities水淹低洼城市drought/flood/sandstormssweepacross...干旱/洪水/沙尘暴横扫3.环保措施sortrubbish垃圾分类developrenewableresources可再生资源fightagainstpollutionsustainabledevelopment可持续发展environmentallyfriendlyproducts环保产品dealwithrubbishproperly正确处理垃圾recycletextbooks/trash课本/垃圾回收利用keepthebalanceofnatureimpro