英语竞赛小作文投诉信.docx

英语竞赛小作文投诉信

第一篇：英语竞赛小作文投诉信5）投诉信投诉信是一种常见的公务信函，用以向某个机构的负责人表达自己对某一情况的不满。投诉信的重点在于具体说明投诉的缘由，一般还要提出解决方案。在陈述投诉的缘由时要有理有节，措辞客观，谦恭有礼，须知收信人是帮你解决问题的人，而并非肇事者。投诉信的正文部分由三个段落组成，其功能分别为：第一段：说明相关性；表明写信意图：投诉。第二段：详细陈述所投诉的问题。第三段：表达希望问题得到迅速解决的心情。请看下例：Directions:Writealettertoyouruniversitypresident,complainingaboutthecanteenservice.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyournameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing”instead.Donotwritetheaddress.例文：DearMr.President,I’masophomoremajoringinCivicEngineering.Iamwritingtoyoutocomplainaboutthecanteenserviceoncampus.Thereexistatleasttwoproblemsthatneedquicksolutioninthecanteenservice.First,thereishardlyanypersityindishes.Wearegettingincreasinglytiredofeatingthesamefoodallyeararound.Second,itistoonoisyinthecanteen,withtheloudspeakersblaringoutcommercialsallthetime.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemycomplaintsseriously.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Yourssincerely，LiMing(100words)评析：这封投诉信的第一段包括两句话，第一简洁地表明自己的身份，第二1句表明自己写信的意图。第二段的第一句是主题句，指出学校食堂至少存在两个问题需要解决，然后列举出两个方面的问题：食物单调和环境太吵。第三段期望自己的投诉能得到认真对待。投诉信钻石句型：第一段Iamwritingtoyoutocomplainabout---Iamwritingtomakeacomplaintabout---Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith---IamwritingtoinformyouthatIamdissatisfiedwith---Iamwritingtodrawyourattentionto---IamwritingthislettertotellyouhowdisappointedIhavebeenwiththeafter-saleserviceofyourshop.第三段Ihopemycomplaintswillbetakenintoseriousconsideration.Ihopeyouwillgivedueattentiontothismatter.Itrustyouwilltakemycomplaintsseriouslyandtakepropermeasurestoimprovethesituation.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivethisletterseriousconsideration.Iwouldliketogetthismattersettledbytheendofthismonth.第二篇：考研英语小作文(投诉信)Dear_______，Iam.(自我介绍)IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout_______.Thereasonformydissatisfactionis______________(总体介绍).Inthefirstplace,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面).Inaddition,____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面).Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit___(感觉)to____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).Iappreciateitverym