英语四六级CET写作.pptx

三、评分标准采用整体评分的方法（globalscoring）：ideas;organization;language.阅卷标准分5等：2、5、8、11和14分。5分：基本切题。思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的语言错误。8分：基本切题。思想表达比较清楚，文章尚连贯。但语言错误较多，其中一些是严重错误。11分：切题。思想表达清楚，文字连贯。有少量的语言错误。14分：切题。思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语言错误。仅有个别小错误。词数不符合要求扣分。题目：BicyclesAnImportantMeansofTransportinChina.提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途Score:14BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople-manandwoman,oldandyoung-ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.Thatiswhy(+句子）Chinaiscalled"thekingdomofbicycles."Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.Score:11Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday'sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople'sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider'sstrength,biyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecountary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.IthinkthepopulationofChina'sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becuseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit'squalitywillbeimproved.Score:8BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.Theuse