最简化雅思写作ppt课件.ppt

最简化雅思写作我看评分标准
为什么总是5分
从5到6
7分以上
15句思路框架介绍
V.2篇范文解析

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1.物理疗法NOSOUND

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I.我看评分标准
I.我看评分标准

雅思作文四大评分标准

TaskResponse（任务回应）
CoherenceandCohesion（一致与连接）
LexicalResource（词汇资源）
GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy（语法范围与正确性）

I.我看评分标准
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I.我看评分标准

I.我看评分标准

I.评分标准的背后

I.我看评分标准—结论

II.为什么总是5——还原雅思考官评分过程
《剑7》p169

Somepeoplethinkthatuniversitiesshouldprovidegraduateswiththeknowledgeandskillsneededintheworkplace.Othersthinkthatthetruefunctionofauniversityshouldbetogiveaccesstoknowledgeforitsownsake,regardlessofwhetherthecourseisusefultoanemployer.

What,inyouropinion,shouldbethemanfunctionofauniversity?

II.还原雅思考官评分过程

Whatknowledgeandskillsshoulduniversitiesprovidehasbeenarguedformanyyears.Somepeoplethinkthatthetruefunctionofuniversitiesprovideknowledgefortheirownpurpose,butnowadays,moreandmorepeoplepointoutthatuniversitiesshouldprovidegraduateswiththeknowledgeandskillsaccordingtotheworkplace.

II.还原雅思考官评分过程

Thefirstreasonforuniversitiesshouldprovidetheseknowledgeandskillisthestudents’needs.Obviously,themostofthestudentsgotouniversitypurposeofistogetsomeknowledgeandskillswhichcouldmakethemhavetheabilitytogetajob.Ifauniversitydoesnotprovidetheseknowledgeandskills,thestudentsmightnotgetajobandtheywouldbeverydisappointed.Asaresult,theuniversitywouldloseitsstudents.

II.还原雅思考官评分过程

Moreover,providingknowledgeandskillsneededintheworkplacemaksauniversityprogress.Thenewskillsandinformationalwaysareinitiatedintheworkplace,sofocusingontheneedsoftheworkplacetheuniversitycouldgetsoundstrategiestodoresearchandmakeitmoremordenization.

II.还原雅思考官评分过程

Lastly,providingtheseknowledgeandsillscouldbenefitourcountrywhichusuallygivesafinancialsupporttouniversities.Havingtheseknowledgeandskills,studentsaremoreeasytogetajob,andthiscanmakeourcountries’economystrong.

Inconclusion,itcanbesaidthatprovidingtheknowledgeandskillswhichtheworkplaceneedsiseveryuniversities’basicfunction.(232words)

II.还原雅思考官评分过程

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